I count 587 words when I tally out a duplicate statement and what isn't pertained to training (which when compared to the fluff rule, I feel isn't fluff either).
587 words --> 58.7 --> 59 experience
Bagon seems to have done just a bit more training, so it'll get 30 points.
The pokemon participating with Bagon (Axew) will recieve the remainder, 29.
Also, I would like to point this out:
- Quote :
- Now keep it going till I say stop!”she ordered as both pokemon responding the best way they would as they were blasting the powerful blast up and keeping it going the sky almost lightening up in rainbow colors as they continued to kept the Dragon pulse going into full speed she watched as she was training her pokemon giving them the ability to launch this move instantly which only furthered her reason for becoming a Dragon Master.
This sentence is a really large run-on, missing the proper punctuation. As a suggestion of improvement, read over your sentences when you're writing them, adding in commas, semi-colons, colons, and other punctuation as necessary. If you want a second set of eyes to look over them, there's quite a few people that'd be willing to do so ;3